Hi Jaxon Thank you for sending me your writing - I really like the adjectives you chose for each picture. Adding adjectives is always something to keep in your mind, this is what makes your writing more interesting for people to read. Well done. Helen H
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Hi Jaxon
ReplyDeleteThank you for sending me your writing - I really like the adjectives you chose for each picture. Adding adjectives is always something to keep in your mind, this is what makes your writing more interesting for people to read. Well done.
Helen H